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  • [Fun] Poem About Disneyland :)

    At school, we had to write a poem about an event in History. (Of course I chose Disneyland)

    I asked my teacher about it, and she said it wasnt a real event in history, but to give it a shot. (I was upset when she said that, :rant: but oh well)





    Does anyone else have a poem to share?) Im sure all of us would love to hear it!!!



    I dont know If I will share mine. :unsure:








    *EDIT* or a story, or a dream!!! This should be fun!!!
    :lol:SkItTlEs:lol:






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    I have one, yes.

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      Finally a place
      where we are free to dream and
      free to imagine.


      Haiku is my medium of choice!

      I think it was wise of your teacher to recognize that this was topic that is special to you (and of historical value too). Poetry flows best when it's written for something in which you have passion.

      Please share if you feel comfortable to do so!

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          WOW I like it
          :lol:SkItTlEs:lol:





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          • #6
            Re: Poem About Disneyland

            Originally posted by Datameister View Post
            I have one, yes.

            Please share?

            Originally posted by Belle Zen Whistles View Post
            Finally a place
            where we are free to dream and
            free to imagine.


            Haiku is my medium of choice!

            I think it was wise of your teacher to recognize that this was topic that is special to you (and of historical value too). Poetry flows best when it's written for something in which you have passion.

            Please share if you feel comfortable to do so!
            I enjoy Haiku too

            Well I dont like writing poetry on things i dont really like..... good point....
            :lol:SkItTlEs:lol:





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              Wow, what a great elegy to honor Walt's life! True to the elegy form and true to Walt. Great job!

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                Originally posted by Peoplemover Priit View Post
                I just wrote an elegy for Walt Disney for English. It's not something super good, but oh well.

                Wait wait, I just noticed what you said here...this IS good! Is this something that you're telling yourself? Obviously you put a lot of thought into it so it must be special to you! And it brought a little tear to my eye, so you were weaving something sentimental into the poem, as is the style of the elegy.

                I think it's great. I give you an A+.

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                  Originally posted by SkittlesMcGee943 View Post
                  Please share?



                  I enjoy Haiku too

                  Well I dont like writing poetry on things i dont really like..... good point....

                  Haiku is fast and fun! It's the easiest kind of poetry for me to write. Actually maybe the easiest anything for me to write. I once wrote an 8 page haiku form poem - so many things I might have had trouble saying otherwise were somehow easy to express when broken down into 5-7-5.

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                    What a fantastic thread!
                    Very talented MiceChatters!

                    I have no brilliantly inspirational scribblings in my back pocket, but I love me some off-the-cuff haiku, so...

                    Main Street Twinkle Lights
                    Pirates, Teacups, Wilderness
                    Magic Surrounds Us



                    Or, for those negative folks in the audience -



                    Stupid construction
                    Strollers smack my ankles - ouch!
                    All is expensive.


                    And the truly inspirational...


                    Ignore the long line
                    Delightfully sweet and warm
                    I love you, churro.

                    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
                    A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men.
                    -Roald Dahl
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                    • #11
                      Re: Poem About Disneyland

                      Originally posted by HelloKimmie View Post
                      What a fantastic thread!
                      Very talented MiceChatters!

                      I have no brilliantly inspirational scribblings in my back pocket, but I love me some off-the-cuff haiku, so...

                      Main Street Twinkle Lights
                      Pirates, Teacups, Wilderness
                      Magic Surrounds Us



                      Or, for those negative folks in the audience -



                      Stupid construction
                      Strollers smack my ankles - ouch!
                      All is expensive.


                      And the truly inspirational...


                      Ignore the long line
                      Delightfully sweet and warm
                      I love you, churro.


                      Haha! Nice! The negative and inspirational made me laugh. Ah, churro.

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                        Why thank you, BZW -
                        you started the haiku ball rolling with a really great one -
                        glad my little offerings could make you chuckle!
                        ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
                        A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men.
                        -Roald Dahl
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                        • #13
                          Re: Poem About Disneyland

                          Originally posted by SkittlesMcGee943 View Post
                          Please share?
                          Maybe. It's a geeky one...even for an MCer. We'll see. In the mean time, I'm digging everyone else's!

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                            Re: Poem About Disneyland

                            Originally posted by HelloKimmie View Post
                            What a fantastic thread!
                            Very talented MiceChatters!

                            I have no brilliantly inspirational scribblings in my back pocket, but I love me some off-the-cuff haiku, so...

                            Main Street Twinkle Lights
                            Pirates, Teacups, Wilderness
                            Magic Surrounds Us



                            Or, for those negative folks in the audience -



                            Stupid construction
                            Strollers smack my ankles - ouch!
                            All is expensive.


                            And the truly inspirational...


                            Ignore the long line
                            Delightfully sweet and warm
                            I love you, churro.



                            I like how you combined the good with the Bad!!!!


                            WONDERFUL!!!!

                            I love how creative you all are


                            This is fun
                            :lol:SkItTlEs:lol:





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                              Re: Poem About Disneyland

                              Originally posted by Datameister View Post
                              Maybe. It's a geeky one...even for an MCer. We'll see. In the mean time, I'm digging everyone else's!


                              Okay, Wanna make a deal Data?

                              Ill share mine, you share yours? :cgrin:

                              believe me, mine is probly geekier!!!!
                              I got a bad grade because I had "bad rythm" sorry that was random!!! lol
                              :lol:SkItTlEs:lol:





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