Re: <.< >.> uh. I need a woman's perspective.
I read your story and liked most of it.... Something baout the "black lipstick" part didn't work for me.... I think most girls...at least the younger ones I know who are rebellious don't wear it.. it's to cliche for a goth girl... I even know Goth girls who think it's cliche.
I also don't like the "...held eachother and laughed." line... it sounds off..
Other than that, I really liked it. You know how people say that "When one door closes, a window opens."? This story sounds reminds me of that whoosh noise a window makes when you first crack it open...