what do you guys think of my comedy act?

[migitmouse88]

[Tui]

The ending is pretty good, but could use a little work. There is one fault in my opinion, and this is only my opinion, the beggining starts off pretty slow, you would lose the audience's attention by the time you got to the end.

this part is actually really good, I would just give a little background as to the bird and the dog, and get to this part quicker. It has potential, good work!